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Friday, October 26, 2012

Fire works

The Amazing Fireworks


Once upon a time a boy named David was wondering back inside his house until fireworks were blazing across his house. He looked outside his window to see what was going on and he saw fireworks blasting one by one.

Then he remembered it was fireworks day so he asked his dad if he could get some money to buy some fireworks then he came back and asked his dad to light the fire works.

He was having so much fun until one of the fireworks went up and came back down and hit all of the rest of the fireworks and the fireworks went every where but one of the fireworks went the wrong way and hit David.

thanks stevie & Kevin for checking my work.

Friday, October 19, 2012

Stomach churing




A boy and a girl named Jack and Jill were having a family day, it was there Dad’s birthday. They were going to Rainbow’s End. They had ten dollars each to spend .

When they got there the first thing they went on was the roller coaster. It was so fun but when they went around the loop the roller coaster stopped. They were all stranded up there.

A few minutes later Jill fell out of the roller coaster. But as she fell she could fly. So instead of dieing from her fall she helped everyone to get out of the roller coaster. Everyone thanked her for their rescue.